The Master~ (reworked)
Truth of wordsOn blue lines of pageOne after the otherOn wings of timeI could not see The literary masterpieceOnly feel..The pounding of his penHours passed Birdsong in the airHis leather chairA dream...
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Dan this is an intriguing and profound poetic glimpse into a life of despair. Often the best minds feel as though they've failed. You'e captured the sad beauty of this man exquisitely. This is a new...
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Thanks John.. I pared it down some, actually a lot. Hopefully it's the same poem. The question is will people get it with half the original words gone.. :).. hope so. I wish I could do in life what I...
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You can't please everyone, you've got to try and please yourself. Meet me at The Garden Party Dan, and we can discuss this in more detail. In the mean time, you have nothing to worry about.
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Thanks Curtis.. I'm not worried. It is what it is now. A little more tweaking perhaps, or just walk away. I'm walking (after removing one more useless word). I have to stop or there won't be anything...
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You haven't failed Alexis... just hard times, things will get better. You do great here.. love that you're nice enough to comment on my poems.. You're a very worthy person in my book.
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It comes to poets and writers at one time or another DanYour depiction of despair is very powerfulMaggie
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Love this Dan, it's true that we are always are own worst critic..You captured this BeautifullyHugs,Sky
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Thanks Maggie.. you're right, I've felt it a time or two myself.
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Thanks for the second look Curtis... yes, our babies, and worth worrying about.
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